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[Folding Cranes]

Greatness

I'm amazed that this is all FBF it must've taken some well invested time to get it just right. whenever I try to make anything FBF I just can never get the movement as smooth as I want it to be any tips?

TheBoogley responds:

thanks!! :D
tips, eh? hmm... learn how to build easing in and out, and overlapping action into your movements, and spend time on it. lots of time watching, getting advice and fixing faults

[Radio Gosha :: DAMF]

Great Work!

I really feel what you were trying to do is showcase your overall talent and i can dig that and still love it. But the music felt out of place and the animations seemed random. Still very awesome but you know what i'm getting at.

the way you make the music and animations go together to give you an entire grasp of a story within the words of the song is where you talent truly shines.

[Shanes B-day gift]

Well a pretty decent attempt at flash for sure

But a few tips though
1. Learn how to make a start button for the beginning so it doesn't loop it's easy to find a tutorial online and makes your flash look very professional even at a novice level.
(p.s. though make sure you find a tutorial for the kind of action-script your using)

2. Set the music you use to Stream instead of what i'm assuming is event since its the default that way it won't play multiple times over itself and get annoying when it loops.

3.Try to come up with some sort of plot or even make it really goofy like for example Naruto is eating and ice-cream cone and one of them bumps into him and spills it an he's all like HELLO NO!!!! and then they fight.

4. Last but certainly the most important take everything you've learned from this and strive to out due yourself next time. A flash isn't something that has to get done in one night take your time and spend a little time each day working on it when your finally done you'll be glad you spent all the effort. good luck and have fun!

snowstorm56 responds:

i have no idea why i respond to these anymore lol no one ever gets the answer....

anyway thanks for the tips, but the basis for this is my friends b-day was yesterday and i just took his favorite video game characters and made them beat up naruto because he hates naruto.....i don't see how a story line would even help with this....

but thanks for the tips, however for number 1: i am agenst using a start button for a number of reasons the most prominant is the fact that i find them incredibly annoying to work with but thats just me.....

[The Justin Bieber Show]

haha

Your jokes are so random i love it!

[License to Combo: Revamp]

it's pretty good.

It's pretty good but as other reviews have said it's really deprived of plot and has dudes that don't even fight back. the plot doesn't even need to be good. just give your dude a goal. it's a very simple formula

Stick man fights seemingly endless henchman
the Stick man fights boss
Epic battle ensues
Eventually Stick man wins
the perfect stick fight =D

still very good talent and style your just a step away from true awesomeness.

[Madness: Rising]

Does it make a lick of sense?

NO

Is it unbelievably awesome?

a thousand times HELL YES!!!!!
though it did end abruptly but at 60 FPS you must've been dead tired of making it.

[Spooky Deleted Scenes!]

Friggin Random as hell

i don't know how this was supposed to make something about anything clearer but it definitely was confusing!
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Destiny Turn-outs
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Sex: Cube that falls on you says "you die of aids"
Drugs: Cube that falls on you says "You have contracted neurological damage"
Rock & Roll: Cube that falls on you says "You've Gone Deaf"

[Don't Sleep, Robby!]

Excite bike B$#ch! What?! What?! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

one of your greatest works yet as far as originality and pretty much overall funniness concerns. Even with the inside jokes it doesn't cripple it really at all i thought you sir WIN NOVELTY CHEWING GUM!

Bobert-Rob responds:

AWESOME, MY FAVORITE.

[Rockoons 2]

very nice

im not usually much of a furry fan but you make it feel so right haha

[The MAC & PC show]

lol i love it

what really makes it funny is that its true!